I like ur poem! very good!

Great poem. It flows really good. and thanks for commenting on my poems it means a lot.

Love & God bless
Lauren

This is such a beautiful poem! well done! hope to see more soon

Hey, and welcome to the club.

This poem really has potential. The only thing I found was punctuation was'nt so good. So I have came up with a little outline you may want to use.

If forever had to end tonight and our happily ever after didn't look so bright[,] I would hold you [so] tight and regret every "[I] love you" that was [to be] left unsaid.

Every [sensual] kiss we could of had, every second you we hung up and [I] was left [unsettled] and sad. Every precious memory we created would be stored [secredly] in my mind never to be forgotten.

Even though [I] have you today you could be gone tomorrow. In the arms of someone new and my heart would forever hurt and yearn for you.

cuz your the type of guy one could find once in a life time.

That's why [I] want to take time to appreciate what [I] have forget about what [I] don't,
speak my emotions even if you wont.
Tell you how I Cherish you, that thoughts of you are always in my mind.
So if your here today and gone tomorrow know that what i say is true and forever and always I'll love you.

[Why? because I love you] << Maybe would be good there

Few add's I stuck in but it is a good poem.

Nice job.

Alex xxx

Another well written poem full of emotion.. 5/5

Aww this is lovely i really liked it, beautifully written, 5/5

Wow this poem left me in tears... "/ ii really liked it =D keep going =)