Wow, that was an amazing poem.
I think the rhyme and the flow was
beautiful. It was absolutly flawless.
I couldn't find anything wrong with the poem.
Very well done.
<3Tay
5/5

Wow the last two stanzas flew into my head like a symphony of words. The third stanza is absolutely beautifully done. Your wording and the change in rhyme scheme made it so perfect to read along with the story being told. It was kind of like the climax of a movie, where your on the edge of your seat and you don't want to miss a single frame.
The first two stanzas were good too. They set the structure for the rest of the poem and made the piece as amazing as it is. The only thing that I had was the flow of the first two lines of the first two stanzas. It seemed like a syllabe or two were missing and that made those lines shaky. But other than that small detail, this was a wonderful poem and one of the best I've read in a long time. My hat goes off to you.

_Anthony Doubal_

I thought it was really touching and beautiful. it flowed so well with great word selection. It was interesting as I read it. I recently decided that tomorrow is a new day and yes, a chance for new things.
Great Job.

This is one of those poems that almost everyone can relate too! "
5/5 for me,
I absolutely loved it

I love this! I can truly relate to this. 5/5

Wow. That was... beautiful. I loved it. I don't know what else to say, it was just marvelous. 5/5

This is another short but sweet poem. it has feeling and debth and is filled with truth.
5/5

I recently broke up with my boyfriend and thank god there are poems like this one! lol
Your writing here is very true and easy to indentify with.

''As each new day brings another chance''
''For the ecstasy of a true romance''

That's how I feel exactly now!
So in a way you give people hope with your poem, and that's also a very beautiful thing.

5/5

take care

xo

angelique