Natalie, this is such a powerful, emotional write. Writing a piece about abortion from the foetus point of view is the most motive too!

You gave the foetus a voice a character a love and respect for its mother. This drew the reader closer to the unborn child, humanised him, which is of course how he really would be, a helpless little human baby!!

You then described the abortion in detail, limbs being torn, screams, blood and then finally death!

I am left breathless and I feel like I have been a witness to such an unnecessary brutal murder!

Your work, as always is spectacular.

Michael x

Natalie, this is awesome poem. You really made me rethink my view about abortion. I think you hit the target very well.

It is absolutely fantastic have such a brilliant idea to take the weakest one's view for seeing this process..

Well done and good luck in your contest.

This poem is great very heartfelt great job you had me bawling like a baby