Hey angel may i know that to whom u wrote it for? I don't know what was wrong with u. plz tell me more clearly abt urs i will surely help u.....

Very good in short excellent

keep it up!
from jefferson

So sweet, and reflects how caring and helpful u r... Best wishes,,,

Sounds like u sent this to a best friend.. try putting it in stanzas its easier to read even if you dont ryhme just try it

I like it....good job :)

~Alex

I like it alot x

This one was way better