Oh my. This was extremely explicit. But besides the nasty topic of rape and murder.. It was very well written. I love the repititon. Now, this one of those poems you can work repitition into without the flow being screwed up. You did a excellent job working with such words as these. :] Keep up the great work. 5/5!

Love, Your number one fan. :]
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A very good write, with an unusual style that fit the message well. I enjoyed this read!
One suggestion if I may:
"Grab the girl, force her on the bed,
Now tie her up tight.
Ignore her screams, those tears she shed,
Turn off the light."
As always an opinion.

Amazing!! ur one of the best around here!!