Aww...it's so ad and sweet. It actually made me think of Derek AND Jake, which is an odd combination in a poem. It was absolutely stunning.

Not really sure what you sound like,
Gotta think hard to remember you face.
Though, I sometimes relive the pain I felt,
When you finally decided to leave this place.

^^ This actually made me think of my grandfather, oddly enough. Becuase...I think we've twisted who he used to be and made him into a superhero isntead of the peson he was. so it's sad to me, not being able to remember the little things...

gorgeous poem hon.

This is really good.!
I love this poem..!
i have writen a poem entitled I love you good bye.. but it wasn't as beautiful as yours,
mine was so different from yours,