Wow, i'm impressed. That was one of the better poems i've read today. Alot of people just write crap that sounds good together, including myself sometimes. But that was really well written...i kinda thought he was a prisoner from like a war or something, but it was still awesome.
Luv,

-Blue

I knew he was in prison, but wasnt sure who he was talking to, bit it didnt matter. that poem was perfect.

i think that this was one of the most well written and emotionally beautiful poems i have read in a long time. being the strange person i am, i kinda thought about it as maybe not literally a prisoner in cell but maybe about somebody thats subconscensely trapped. i dont know, thats just what i was thinking of. anyway, i enjoyed it very much, keep it up.

~Alicia~

That was the best poem I've read so far today. Great job! I have one somewhat abstract like that poem called "Rebels In The Night" feel free to vote and/or comment. Keep writing.

hey i cant get over how talented u are. every poem ive read is incredible! keep it up