Ii loved iit.
=]

When you left me i was lost and still lost. ^^this sentence dosen't make since, at the end you don't need to say, "and still lost"^^

i just scared to say that i love you when you knew that i Had feeling for you. ^^in the begining you need to say,"i'm[i am] just scared......"

but other wize it was an poem that showed emotion and feeling that was great. 3/5