Wow hun beautifully written, i couldn't of said it better myself! keep it up.

i loved this part:

I just wanna know your there
for our love is something special and rare
but you can do better than me
and someday that you'll also see.

a definite 5/5

You think you don't deserve jonny. Jonny thinks the total opposite way. well, great write, your brother
Aaron

U should never lower ur standards w/ a guy.. im sure the guy is very lucky to have u.. nice write

It's really good I love it :) 5/5