"that was my response all the time,"
[that was my response every time]
- All the is blunt, every is in a way too. But, I'd like to think is a bit more poetic.

"But even family can go to far,"
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I really like this poem. It's relatable to a lot of people, one being me. Which I think made the emotional values even stronger. You've done a good job writing.

Kudos.