Comments : Fake it (Free Verse)

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    -Fake it

    The title cofused me untill I got to the end then I understood. I was drawn into your poem so forcefully that I began to wonder what happened to the Horse, the Eagle, the Lion to turn such powerfull creatures into the paracitic Leech. I feel as if this poem is us finished and once it is you'll take it to the next levle where it belongs.