Tat was so fantastic...

Rythm was good... flow of thoughts was marvellous...

If only..... this is so nicely written... Especially time instead of healing playing old tunes...

Nice one..

Keep it up....

Wow
i never been mistaked when i told you "you have a talent". as usual you amaze me by your poems, such feelings, such pain and such love. wow, really great poem i can't take a part and comment on it since all the parts were really great

good job and keep writting