The wording was nice and different. The poem was a nice length for what you were wanting to say. The format is good. 5/5

I really liked this poem it has a very nice flow to it, and it's one I personally can relate to.
My favourite stanza was this:
But you do so with a twist,
a uniqueness to your trade,
handing out candy with one hand,
while the other yields a jagged blade.
5/5 :)