I could feel manny emotions in this poem and some fear. My favorite stanza was your last one, its like as though your not leaving the past totally behind which is a good thing.

Most poems like this say of a totally new begining but yours says you still remember i like that.

Excellent i love it its so great!!!

I thirst for pure water even though I am wet
-love this part
I have ignored my compass, straying off course
My heart is filled with sadness and much remorse-- like this, i think of it as when we dont follow our conciose [sp]
Then I see a lighthouse thank God there is hope
--thats amazing,very nice part, buetiful
it ended great as well
good work 5/5

Omg, this is magnifacent! wow, can u teach me how to write this good?? lol, i really liked the words you used.
I thirst for pure water even though I am wet
It is a wonder my soul has not sunk yet
I have ignored my compass, straying off course
My heart is filled with sadness and much remorse

^^^ that is my favorite stanza i read it like over and over because it flowed so well. "thirst for pure water even though i am wet" that line specifically stood out, thanks

Wow, I could feel every emotion that was in that poem! I thought it was magnificent. Really. Everything about it was so beautiful and unique in your own style. I'm sure that alot of people can relate to it and the struggles that you've described. Great job! 5/5

Wow that was a great poem! there was some much emotion in it great job linda

An absolutely magnificent piece of poetry!

I was in despair dangling at the end of my rope
Then I see a lighthouse thank God there is hope
Yet I look back to the haunting darkness with much sorrow
I must avoid the same mistakes for the trip tomorrow
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
a wonderful stanza.

this piece was fantastic, with the rhyme and it flowed together so very well. brilliant wording, and amazingly penned

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Very realistic i like