Aamazing job
I hope that you canfind her again :)

This is really beautiful and romantic poem. If the circumstances had been different...I am sure you would have seen tearsdrops falling down her face... Eyes filled with happiness.. This poem reveals the vulnerable, sensitive part of Adel... That Adel..someone was able to reach her heart...touch his soul..

I like this stanza very much "Will she be mine and only one?
Because without her love I feel weak"

It would be so ideal to find a soulmate and manage to keep the soulmate...get together and live happily ever after.. Unfortunately.. I think this kind of fairytales exists only in our imagination.

Well done.

Adel,

If the two of you were really meant to be together, you would not have drifted apart. This may sound cruel and heartless, but some day you will find that special person and then you will know my words are true.

Much love, Ingrid

Beautiful write bro!!!
And somehow i do agree wth Ingrid. Life will give u a second chance n for sure that will be ur destiny ^_^

God bless u Bro!!!

It is another wonderful one of your poems.
i am really sorry for that, but i am sure you will get over this soon.

...it amazing how love can turn u down with an promise unkept...good poem..hope u will refind some else u truely deserve..unless..if it was your effect...great poem...

Two thumbs up !!

From the poem i can understand what u felt to her :(

I feel for you, the poem is beautifull filled with geuine emotions, its her loss :)

Nice poem..hoever, there seems to be a confusion..

Wow. i am speechless.....this girl you speak of, must have been very special to you. i cannot express how sorry i am for the BOTH of you.

may Allah keep you safe, and moving ahead in life.

salam
salwa~

Salam wu alykum

mashAllah this poe is exellent i really felt where you are coming fro, i now its not easy when some one you love becoes some you loved. But u poem it amazing mashAllah i especailly liked the rymth of the pome and also the word choice. But there something i didnt understand in your poem. What do you mean by
I have fallen for her and my real life has begun
As the red color never left my cheeks

sorry i didnt get what u where trying to say but over all great work mashAllah keep it up

This poem is so beautiful. I love it.