WOW I love how you did the relation between you and your heart. PURE ORIGINALTY. 5/5 for sure^^

Excellent job. It really felt like I was reading a letter that you were addressing to your heart. Spectacular job explaining a situation in which you met a boy. :] Excellent work on your part. 5/5.

Omg! i love this.
its awesome.
great job! =]

OMG I JUST HAVE TO SAY I LOVE IT...FIRST OF ALL THE TITLE DREW ME IN SO THAT S A BIG PLUS THE STANZAS ALL GO 2GETHER PERFECTLY SO IT HELPS IN THE FLOW OF THE STORY. BUT SERIOUSLY I FELL IN LOVE WITH UR POEM. :p