Comments : Lonely Girl

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Ilike this poem as it offers up a female perscpetive on my thoughts.

    "Guys come and go", well at least thats what I'm told,
    Yet it doesn't make it any easier being on my own.

    There are some flow issues which could be easily rememdied.

    "Guys come and go",
    well at least thats what I'm told,
    Yet it doesn't make it any easier,
    being on my own.

    That is an idea, just thought I would offer up some suggestions on how to improve your flow. I like the messages that you send, but they seem to have a dark undertone to them :(.

    There is someone out there for you. I have never been so sure in my entirely life of that as I have been the past two weeks.

    5/5