Cindy, the depth of inner grief is so clearly rocked through this piece.
I genuinely felt the heartbeat aching in ones chest it was so deeply real.
You've captured this wonderfully and enhanced it with a smooth flow and beat in rhythm, you are so brave and admired for sharing ones heart in such crystal clear words.
Take care Cindy, 5/5

I remember this poem dear and am glad that you shared it after all.
This poem is not just from you but i guess its a voice of every mother, thats where you find pure love in this world without a second thought.

loved this poem and loved the message.

When the clouds clear
Mind again your own
Waiting with my love
Welcoming you home

great end to a great poem

all the best and take care

With all the struggles, you still envision a happy ending. That is one reason you are an inspiration to so many people. This poem is sad but as you have conveyed there is nothing stronger than a mother's love. Hatred in the eyes will one day be replaced with regret. Nice job on this emotional piece!

My love so strong
I'll hold it all for you
your burden I'll carry
That's what mothers do

I loved it and this is my favorite stanza 5/5

This poem is so adorable,I haven't exactly experienced mother's love but I love this poem !

Take care
Isha

Aww... this is so beautiful.... so touching... Mother's love Selfless...pure..and divine... its so wonderfully captured in each line...

It made me remember all the sacrifices my mother made just to make me happy... A mother never ask for anything... the only thing she knows is giving.. giving love... giving all the joy to her children...

You poem has touched all these aspects of mother's love..

'When the clouds clear
Mind again your own
Waiting with my love
Welcoming you home'

^^ this is brilliant... it really touched me..

and the title itself is so beautiful..

Excellent write... Im so glad i read it.. :)

Beautiful title and a very emotional spill as well! As mothers we do get our hearts trampled now and again....but they do return to the one that gave them life....sometimes it's easy to hurt the one you love...knowing that their unconditional love will remain for eternity!

Thanks for sharing this beautiful and sad piece with us all! Love, Debbie

An admirable work once again. So deep with intense feelings and somewhat inspirational. It just touched my heart. Just fantastic!

When the clouds clear
Mind again your own
Waiting with my love
Welcoming you home

Cindy,
To be a mother also mean having to endure the deepest pain imaginable...not only when you give birth but also when you child is in any kind of pain. We suffer as he does....
Very beautiful and heartfelt poem, sweetheart:)

Love, Ingrid

Wow that was very well done!!i love it emotional very nice done!

Hi Cindy..It's been awhile and oh my gosh, this was so sad. Hope things are better.

Miss C,

This is indeed a heartrending piece. Sentiments of profound sorrow and absolute devotion are evident throughout, by which the reader is moved with compassion. I was...

I hope things get better soon.

With love,
Debbie

This is such a moving poem - Amazingly written.

Wonderful work 5/5

Touching and heartfelt..the words touch d inner chords.the selflessness ..the divinity that's A MOTHER! Cindy..u are wonderful..!