Comments : The Voice Inside

  • 15 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    I think we can all relate to this poem with the inner voice, maybe holding the knife is affective as pointing the finger or speaking direct. You write really well! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    Very well written, I know exactly where your coming from.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well written... It can inspire some... Interesting to read!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Nice poem ... well written & beautifully penned 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Purple

    Good poem, love the message. It was very smooth, and kept my attention. :D Thanks for the good read. 4/5

    Structure of the poem could be more properly formatted, but it was certainly well planed out well.