Comments : My Everything

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    I really loved it! It was really cute! I only found a few things wrong, though (and they're really small).

    "I can't pull myself away when I'm lieing next to you."
    ^^'Lieing' should be spelled 'lying'

    "Weither it's a kiss or a hug, you have your ways."
    ^^'Weither' should be spelled 'whether'

    Overall, good poem. I thought it was truthful, and I hope that whoever you wrote it for gets to see it! It was beautiful. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Love it! your writin is very good. and yes it wont let me type very much in boxes on my phone. sucks.