Ur poem is really wonderful...so sad and touchable..besides that ur way was so simple and direct,that's why I enjoyed readin it
Good job keep it up:)
P.S. you never really (tired)..tried..I know that is what U meant but it was the hurry in typin or sth;)

I like the idea of this poem. Enjoy reading it as it flows well. Keep writing... You did a good job!

The slow voice ! Well expressed emotions , well expressed feelings and you expressed the truth very well.. Its reality which is hard to accept .. I truly like this poem ! ..

Prays for you friend !
Love will be in ur life soon Ameen
peace and cheers

5/5
Biya

You've tried.............and tried it good.......lol better..................i loved the flow......and the way u referred to every1......im not at all good at commenting but u got tons of talent.........its absolutely cool dat u can put feeling and thoughts into words.......hope u get on some more cool stuffs of urs.............

peace~