This was an excellent poem that expressed all your emotions when you wrote it. great job.5/5
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Girl an idea : split it into 2 paragraoh it is more readable that way

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it si one fabiolus poem short , great expression and much easy to understand and it have rhyming@@!!!!:)

great 5/5

Wow that's a sad ending but I really lyked it 5/5.....eventually hell see wat he's missing

Excellent! Loved the rhyme...

This was a very strong emotional piece. I think you expressed your feelings well. Keep it up hun. Nik :)