Comments : You'll never know

  • 15 years ago

    by Rinji

    I like it the poem as a nice feel to it 's rhyme and I really like that oh and in the line "you just done seem to care." I think you meant don't just a heads up so you can fix it besides that AMAZING!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Really good poem!
    very well written with a goos set of repitition + the ending just makes the poem perfect!

    "love is ruthless and cruel, i wish you would understand."

    5.5 :)!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Losing a beloved one is never easy...but it feels good to write about it doesn't it?
    It has been such a long time since last you posted!
    Welcome back to the site!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid