Wow,
You speak of so many truths. It is so sad that this world talks of change but does nothing to rectify the situations we are bound to.
As for your poem I think it would read easier if you divided it up a little bit. Please only take this as critique and not downing your poem. You have tremendous talent.

Everytime I read one of your poems I think that perhaps one day in the future I will be hearing this as a rap on the radio. It would be refreshing to hear words like this though.

Wow. finally some one writing about what really is happening in the world. its brilliant. i love it. i would even go as far as saying its one of my favs of this category..
i agree with the other person who commented ur stuff, it does sound like it could be heard on the radio one day. you should look into that.

xx