Comments : I Could Wish For Better

  • 11 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    A lesson learnt is priceless.

    This poem is priceless too. The flow was excellent and the word choice perfect. All this and a good sound moral too!

    Excellent

    Michael

  • 11 years ago

    by Happy without a reason

    This is grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat ^^

    thx for sharing

  • 11 years ago

    by cory

    Wow very powerful and skillfully written.Great poem 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I swear, you are gonna be famous one day!

    you pieces seem so unforced and relaxed and just smooth like it doesn't seemed pushed or defyed by gravity, if you now what i mean

    but you have a real good style of writing and never try to write like anyone else or fixed you style to be like anyone else

    Stay Talented 5/5