A few minor mistakes but pretty good
i like how it began and ended the same
it was rly cool how u talked about the look like it had its own mind and was a seperate being
good job
4/5

Minor spelling mistakes. But the idea was really good!!

Once again this is a very good poem and it has a lot of depth and emotion but the constant varriation in the lenght of the stanza thows me off.
other thank that it is a great poem.
4/5

Wow I could truly feel the emotions you expressed her with your words. I could tell it came straight from you heart which made it that much more interesting to read well done. *5/5*

I really like this poem... but your vocabulary seemed a bit.. safe.. try using more powerful words.. but other than that .. i like the concept.. its really good.
5/5

This is a good poem.The flow was a little sloppy and I thiunk it would be better if you organized it more.5/5 though

---amber---

Great poem! very well written!