Adel
How wonderful to see you posting again. I love reading your verses. This one is quite beautiful.
Great job!
((Hugs))
Cindy

Hey Adel,

How are you doing, beautiful hair? I love this poem, it has such a great flow to it and a fast beat....You seem to be a man who thinks quickly, it is reflected in your words.

Nice to read you for the first time;)

Ingrid

This poem has a fast flow... Very nice and unique. I have seen nothing like this before. Refreshing. :)

Keep on writing. :)

Hey i really liked this poem =)
i love how uve structured it.
great use of words. keep it up. 5/5 xo.