Bravo!! lol always wanted to say that ^^ but really I love it the line I like most is
And a smile creeps along my face
As he smiles at me
ok there two but don't blem me it's because you write so good lol but any ways I also like the one that says our out of my leagu and I haven't liked a guy a lot older then me for about a year so I got over that I rated
keep writing
^^ Sami!!!