This poem has hit me deep in the heart and it hurts..it reminds me of the girl that i broke her heart not long time ago...i hope she will forget me and forgive me

your poem was deep

Yeah Adel is right...

Touching poem.. keep it up..

Best wishz... Karan

"Is there any body going to listen to my story, all about the girl that came to stay. she's the kind of girl you want that makes you sorry, still you don't regret a single day. Ah, girl."

Girl by the beatles. thought it went well with your name and as this song is truly amazing, so is this poem. keep it. "Nice write from Poetry Knight"

Oh that was so sad...simple and pure bcoz it's comin directly from the heart...good job..
Take care:)..

The last 2 lines are jsut amaizing , how can a broken hear beat !!?
how his beat is difrent?
will he ever know thsi difnrece?

i am veryy pleased from the worsd here and the image seen ^_^ it will always stay in my mind to remmer how you expresed things ^_^