I cry
And I fail.
I break
And I bleed.
Wait, let me put on my mask
So you won't really see.
But bit by bit,
I'm falling apart.
And I'm just waiting
Until you notice when I'm gone.

My favorite part...
ur poem was so sad and touchable...and I liked the way u wrote it...it was so simple but deep..good job,keep it up

I really like this poem. The pace is great and it's a really emotive piece however I do think the ending could be a bit stronger. Overall good piece!