Wow, i'm really sorry for your loss. but this poem was really good.

That's a lot to go through at such a young age, must've been hard for you... that poem was sooo beautiful, if you think you're not a good writer let me tell you you're mistaken.

Its so touchin n remembers u jus how pericous moments r wit the person u love... I lost my son abt a yr ago... missin him 2 death, but atleast they r in heaven safe n sound!!! Its a sweet yet sad poem!!

Very nice..very deep..i like..keep'em coming

Nice poem....
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Good structure and flow. The way you mirrored ever question with an answer of your own was nice. I'm fond of your writing. Looking forward to more.
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Omg that is like the sadest poem in the word. Im trying really hard not to cry. How sad. You have had a tough life, yet you seem so strong and well. I envy your strength and wish you the best. The poem is truely beautiful and I am sure he is watching over you and your children. God bless you!

Wow you are very talented so don't under estimate yourself so much, this poem was so touching, it was so sad but had so much beauty to it.

you're a very strong person,I'm going 2 be 18 in a few days and don't think i would be able to deal with all that. i hardly cope with myself, i would never myself coping with children but i guess being a mother and having children is like a gift and this poem really showed what a loving and genuine person you are!!

i know this is really different but i lost my brother almost 2 months ago, 2 months on the 16th. anyway every time i miss him i go look at the stars and know its him shining down on me to let me know he is safe and watching over me, he is now my angel just like your children's dad is your angel and will always remain alive in your heart as long as you allow him 2. he will always be looking over you and protecting you.

this was just beautiful, great work!!!! very heartfelt, keep it up!!!! 5/5