Ok that made me cry cause its like my life
i love him to death but all we do is fight

This is awesomely sad i loved it and it had a great flow to it.5/5 = )

The formation of this poem is very well put together it's almost as like there's broken spaces in spots, which makes it feel and looke weird but youmake it work with your words and vocab. ;)

very creative 5/5