Wow, this an intersesting poem to be read. you have used some word that really could describe your imagination.sometimes, i have these thoughts too.
nice poem. keep up.

Amazing hun. You are a very talented writer. I've read some of your other poems but this one really hit me as imagery i can relate to. 5/5

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This is brilliant. I like the way you combine you combine darkness with a little bit of depression. Keep up the good work.

This was great green is part of the nature and the red is voilence in it well its symbolic that way to me great job

Nicee