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I like the sturcture, how theres an alternating stanza length. It adds depth and flow. The last line of the first stanza is obviously shorter than the rest and it takes a little something away, but the message is still amazing.
Wow you are such a strong writer. I think the set up of this poem only adds to your voice and helps to give your words more punch. Nice job.