Comments : Abstract of the Mind

  • 11 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I like the sturcture, how theres an alternating stanza length. It adds depth and flow. The last line of the first stanza is obviously shorter than the rest and it takes a little something away, but the message is still amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Wow you are such a strong writer. I think the set up of this poem only adds to your voice and helps to give your words more punch. Nice job.