Aw thats cute/sad/adorible! i love the word choice and the flow was pretty good too. great job! keep it up :) hope everything works out. 5/5

Oh my gosh,
that was gorgeous.
that was so beautifully written
and was to cute for words to describe.
i totally loved it.
just 1 thing,
i dunno if its intentional or by mistake
but you left out the second e in feelings.
but otherwise great poem.
hope 2 c more soon :)

Awww. i love it.
great job! =D

Thats a gret poem very very cute... id love it if youd comment back! i just wrote a new one..