That was pretty good, it lacked a bit of what you usually put into your writing, but it was still great... Thought i'd add that you're a horrible commenter. They're all the same.. but still glad you FINALLY wrote something else.. and great job again..

That was beautiful. You're such a talented writer, I love every line. The emotion flows through just right. Great poem, 5/5!

-mandy :)

I love this
ive commented alot of yours because im adding you to my favorite authors because youare truely talented :]

brittany:]

oh my names brittany by the way

Nice,
Also this one is full of your emotions, also very sad.
Well written.
Take care

It was wonderful
you really knoe how to rite
best wishes to you and keep writing

Love comes to play, when things turn rough. Genuine love cares, when there's no need.