Wonderful job on the Lira form club challenge.
((hugs))
Cindy

The last line is so sad! You did well on the challenge:)

Hugs,

Ingrid

Wow. This was awesome. Beautiful.. Thanks for introducing lira. :)

This is so great.
I really like it because of the simplicity of it all. Poems these days are about 4 stanzas, and, this being just one, it takes my breath away. It's so unique -- you definetly made it your own. This poem flows well, has creativity but refreshing your mind with one well-thought stanza. Great work.

5/5
- Shanna

I truly love reading your works. This short poem was very sweeet. I also love reading styles like these. 5/5 your under my favorites from now on^^

I really love this poem it was very sweet and cool your under my fav

A short piece of poetry but a very sweet and sad one. the last line was especially sad. it was unique. a brilliant form of poetry. and the flow was amazing.

5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Ooh! I liked this piece a lot. I never do specific styles that have laid out structures that you have to follow -- I find them extremely difficult, and I find them even more difficult to read, when someone doesn't do it right and well.

But you did an amazing job. I've never seen this style, and it was refreshing how you wrote it in such a simple way, but the meaning goes so deep. The emotion portrayed here ... the sadness and the love is just beautiful. And that slight twist (in my eyes anyway) at the end, made this worth the read .

..__MiNDYY