This is a sad and powerfull poem that I can understand it has a nice flow and I am sorry u feel this way and I am here if u need some one to talk to. 5/5

Tammi,

Love it.
particualry the beginning :)
i completly understood where you were coming from
Great poem
Kitty

This was a good poem. I enjoyed it and it seemed to remind me of a part of my life that I really forget a lot of the time.

The flow was WAY off and you need to think about improving it. I think that the main reason I gave this a 5 was cause of the metaphore that was never dropped and the really good emotion that was behind it.