Comments : PRINCE CHARMING

  • 15 years ago

    by Christina Hobbs

    TO YOU,
    I HAVE NEVER BEEN PRINCE CHARMING.
    YET,
    YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN MY QUEEN.

    I HAVE JUST BEEN SOME GUY YOU SPEND TIME WITH.
    TIME TO TIME,
    AND IN BETWEEN.

    YET I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN THE ROCK,
    THE GROUND BENEATH YOUR FEET.
    I'VE BEEN THE WATER THAT QUENCHES YOUR THIRST,
    THE BREAD THAT FEEDS YOUR NEEDS.

    TO YOU,
    I HAVE NEVER BEEN A MAN.
    JUST WEAKNESS IN THE FLESH.

    YET, YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN THE ONE,
    FOR WHOM MY HEART DOES QUEST.
    I HAVE WIPED AWAY YOUR TEARS,
    HELPED YOU TO BELIEVE.

    I HAVE SEEN WHAT YOU CANT,
    WHY CANT YOU SEE ME?
    SO AS YOU GO ON,
    ABOUT YOUR WAY.

    MY PRECIOUS CINDERELLA,
    I'VE ONLY ONE THING LEFT TO SAY.
    I HOPE ONE DAY,
    YOU'LL BELIEVE IN ME.

    THE WAY I BELIEVE IN YOU.
    BUT NOTHING YOU CAN SAY OR DO,
    WILL CHANGE THE WAY I FEEL.
    YOU MAY NEVER COME TO ME,
    BUT I WILL ALWAYS........BE IN LOVE WITH YOU

    that is how i think you should have groupd your sentances together. your writing is very strong for a new writer. keep tyring.