Awwww.... she'll love it!! its good. esp. knowing what u went through w/out her.. lol i know how u felt. hey alteast were not loners we all know how it feels. ur a great writer Nate!! keep it up! 5/5 alwyas
ur lil sis
Kate~LSB23

Hey bro!! loved this one. I remember when you were writing it. 5/5 keep it up! luv ya always~your one and only lil sis~ S_03.

Going those twenty-four hours without talking to you,
Just made me break down inside.
I'm sure you felt this way too,
But I'm glad we finally found somewhere to collide.

my favorite stanza. such a beautiful crashing ending into each other's arms. overall, great write and good flow. she'll love it, no worries. i can see how much you love her. i wish you guys love forever. take care. ciao.