Comments : Prayer for the living

  • 15 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Dave its sad...its good and all but u dont hurt..i no how it is..i hurt ppl too and i try to make them not care 4 me anymore and most times it works but, u should not prayto die..cuz u dont need too and something good will happen to u someday...just dont pray anymore, well not like that...u can pray but not to die..and its a really good poem..
    love it... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this not the fact that you are hurting but the point that comes across to me.The sadness the hurt is what makes the world go round and you should realise this.Hurting others is what makes life a little more complicated but the fixes makes everything worth while!!!I liked this alot!!5/5
    -Kortney-