This was good. The only things is where you said, "basically controling me" the "basically" seemed out of place. Otherwise, good job!!!!

Really good poem, and i agree with josh the basically did feel out of place compared to the rest of the flow of the poem but other than that it was a great.

Its good..i like it..well this part.. (this darkness,
sticks to me like super glue) thats how i feel. but good..5/5