It was a good poem.
It rhymed well and flowed good.
It just felt like something was missing.

Overall good poem 4/5

3rd stanza last line if you take out "During" it will sound and flow better. Other then that the flow was ok and the word choice was great.5/5

Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina