Bravo...mi gabby...stupid boys are sometimes the most lovable

I love your last stanza. I think that is really the best way you could of ended the poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Awesome imagery makes poetry such a fantastic thing to read. Very good work here. Excellent!

Great start. then good middle. i LOVED the ending, it was absofreakinglutely perfect. that was sweet, and cute, and i liked it a ton. <3
you have a good style. I had fun reading this. i will read more.
fantabulous!!

Lexie