Wow...
amazing poem
you did a great job on writing it
this is one of my favorite poems, that ive ever read
truely great...
5/5

Wow...
amazing poem
you did a great job on writing it
this is one of my favorite poems, that ive ever read
truely great...
5/5

Aw hun this is sad
Tears in my heaven
Because a love you wont take
A boy you will kill
And a heart you will break
--straight forward, liked it, good ending

The heaven that you have created for me
The love that you will not give
Makes this heaven hell for me
--like the twist
5/5