Wow, I really liked this poem, it had alot of unchained emotion in it. It flowed easily, it didn't even have to rhyme and it would have sounded awesome, keep writing.
Luv,

-Blue

so sad :( but so amazinggggg loved this part:

"My actions remain unseen to a world that didn't care.
I'm sorry it had to be this way
but you were never there"

incredible...all of it...you're an amazing writer..xx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarePleasexx