Comments : As She Cries

  • 15 years ago

    by Sharon

    Aw dang boy why'd you leave her hanging! lol Jk but it was a very good poem

  • 15 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very interesting poem. The last stanza especially caught my eye when "him" and you seemed to have joined together into one. The first stanza was a bit too typically or common in sad poems. Good job