You have a nice poem here, very nice. I have always found that the nature section of this web site produces some really good poetry and yours is no exception. Much better than the love section sometimes where I think the same words and ideas get used over and over again to the point of exhaustion. This section brings fresh new ideas for almost every line. I think you have found the right words to make the expression of your thoughts come to life and bring the real meaning of it to life. Good work…