Comments : Tranquility

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I like this piece, though your flow is off a bit in places, removing an "and" here and there would help. Some good description and thought behind it in all. good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved this, it is something real and it was amazing just to read it!!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The poem is very well written and the subject is something I am sure a lot of people can relate to.

    take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Ooo i like this poem..its hella good..but me i say one more time and its it but i still do it..anyway..great poem..and keep up the good work..5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    Heh the person above me has the same name.

    Anyway I really enjoyed reading this. i can really relate and it shows both sides of the fence. =) Please keep it up and I will keep reading.

  • 15 years ago

    by Meme

    It is so deep u can really feel it
    the flow was amazing

    keep it up

    ~gIrL~

  • 15 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    This is an amazing poem.
    Simply beautiful.
    5/5