Nice poem:)
I thought the ending two lines were a bit weak compared to the rest of the poem. The descriptions were really cute. I could totally relate to this piece. In your fourth and fifth stanza I may not have wrote lost and loss maybe find something else to use in there. Lovely job though
5/5

Third stanza, "as you eyes..." - should be as your.

Other than that.. No flaws... This was awesome poem in which I feel your emotions. :) Great work, 5/5